the moon turning round from white to
white in morning’s sky where mercy appeared
irrelevant, the cottonwood’s naked black
February limbs reached for that sky that after-
noon—a Union Pacific graffiti-tagged freight
train surging beside a black & blue river the
rain pinging the gray tin roof that evening, the
season’s first rain as if metaphorical tears could wash this a-
way—moonset along the mesa in nimbus
overcast & bitterbrush—a heart tattooed &
straining—a freight train inside the tunnel—a mild
edema, a waxing moon holding water, a white
rope hammock in graying snow between the
cottonwood & the locust—the unin-
habited house trailer atop the bluff where trees
did not take root, the rusted drag harrow
cast off in a sky gray snowdrift—gibbous moon
in an afternoon sky weighed down with
power lines, expectation, a promise of ice the
damaged heartbeat the naked trees the train’s
graffiti as far as the eye can see
Jack Hayes
© 2011
My mid-February poetry spasm continues today with another new poem—& a reminder: if you're interested in reading the poetry from my most recent book, The Spring Ghazals you can either read them on the dedicated blog at the rate of two per week (Wednesday & Saturday), or purchase the book from one of these fine outlets:
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Amazon
Barnes & Noble (new—& a bargain at $11.40 US!)
Amazon UK (£7.94)
Both Amazon & Lulu have the book for $12 US.
Woah. You capture the root and beat of things here--very impressive.
ReplyDeleteHi Caroline: Much thanks! In case you haven't seen my "@" tweet, this & the preceding one are the delayed fruits of my dream hangover. Maybe one more--fingers crossed!
ReplyDeleteOne of the moods of winter with a quiet energy in it; I like the feeling that there are things quivering beneath the surface, and though they seem thwarted now, they haven't gone silent. Some favorite moments: "overcast & bitterbrush", "damaged heartbeat", "in the morning's sky where mercy appeared".
ReplyDeleteHi HKatz: Thanks! Definitely a late winter landscape here. So glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteOh, this one's wonderful! It has such a great rhythm to it.
ReplyDeleteHi Ginger: Thanks! Really glad you liked it!
ReplyDeleteI like this very much. The freight train travelling through the piece and the rhythms of the rain - the images of the moon are all wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI was listening to today's music post at the same time and they actually go together really well.
Kat
Hi Kat: Thanks! Now that's interesting to think of this poem with a Bossa Nova setting. Glad you liked it.
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