Saturday, January 2, 2010

“Crossing on Staten Island Ferry”


For the first Weekly Poem of the New Year I decided to post a piece by a favorite poet, & one who’s appeared several times on Robert Frost’s Banjo, Kenneth Patchen. Patchen’s humanity & lyricism , his emotional candor & his knack for the perfect, understated image are all on display in this work.

If you haven’t read much of Kenneth Patchen’s work, I’d encourage you to check out his poetry or his beautiful, poetic novel The Journal of Albion Moonlight. A search on Robert Frost’s Banjo will take you to several more poems, & there are some good dedicated Patchen poem sites online—you might try the Kenneth Patchen Home Page here, which not only has poems but also links to a number of other sites, as well as some bibliographical information & a biographical timeline.

In the meantime, hope you enjoy this poem, & hope everyone’s new year is off to a good start.

Crossing on Staten Island Ferry

I'd like to die like this...
with the dark fingers of the water
closing and unclosing over these sleepy lights
and a sad bell somewhere murmuring goodnight.

And a girl would stand beside me,
her hair lifted out like a hand against my face;
and I'd say "I'm going to die now."

And she'd answer "All the guns are still:
for men have learned to love one another."

Then a star would nose the water, like a weary gull
which had flown a long way and come at last to rest.

And, when I'd lift my face to look again on the God
I had found for myself
the girl would say "You're not going to die."

And she'd not mean me at all.

Kenneth Patchen

6 comments:

  1. What a beautiful voice is here created, as you said, by lovely, understated images.

    "with the dark fingers of the water
    closing and unclosing over these sleepy lights
    and a sad bell somewhere murmuring goodnight."

    and

    "Then a star would nose the water, like a weary gull
    which had flown a long way and come at last to rest."

    Beautiful!

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  2. Hi Karen: Yes, those are indeed the moments I mean--those & the description of the girl's hair. Glad you liked this!

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  3. Curious and wonderful.The very name Staten Island conjures magic to me who has never been to Amerikay.Happy New Year ,folks.

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  4. Hi TFE: Glad you liked it, & Happy New Year!

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  5. Gorgeous.

    I've become a big fan of Kenneth Patchen. Found one of his poems, late one night, and did a search for him...I believe it lead me here. :)

    ...

    He's so straight-forward, and I think it's harder, for a poet, to still sound so lovely and poetic, when he's straight-forward, rather than fluffy, and mushy, and over-sentimental. Like it's easy to convince people that flowers are gorgeous, or love is happy and nice (ha...funny how it's isn't), but to make 'em look at death, and say, Guess what, it's really not so bad or scary after all, takes talent.

    I wish I could remember the first poem of his I read...it was a knockout.

    ...

    Thanks for mentioning his novel. I didn't know he wrote one, and that's more up my alley: I prefer reading novels instead of actual books of poetry.

    ...

    Do you like Frank Stanford??

    I've been reading-up on him.

    Fellow 'New Yorker', you know. ;)

    ...

    Hope you had a Happy New Year, John. And that your year, too, is off to a great start. :)

    P.S. I just found your new poetry blog.

    Can I mention it over at my blog?

    I have a good post I could work around it. :)

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  6. Hi Ginger: You're completely welcome to mention the Days of Wine & Roses blog on Asleep in New York--that would be great!

    Yes, I do agree with you on Patchen's straightforwardness--he's very direct emotionally, I think, & I think it's difficult both in terms of technique & just plain being vulnerable to write like that.

    I don't know Frank Stanford--will look him up.

    So glad to see you back around!

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