Monday, June 16, 2014

"song with waxing gibbous moon'


song with waxing gibbous moon

a sliver missing from the lefthand edge
that much shy of a silver perfect circle

in two nights bicyclists will still be pedaling
north on Williams Avenue past chain link & roses

& in truth the roses draw inward dulled by twilight
a vague crimson ache clotted in a front yard

but I was mentioning the moon’s imperfection
& thinking of gawky calla lilies on a lawn

otherwise gone to dandelion & ripple grass—
on another front porch a bicycle’s suspended

outlined in fairy lights—but as I was saying,
when I say moon I mean  you—

you: a word all vowel & lacking a lefthand
edge in my mind, so when I say you

I mean me—when the full moon rises Friday
above bicycles & blossoms & this construction site’s

gravel & cyclone fencing I know already
its disc will glow amber behind clouds & clouds


AK Barkley
© 2014

1 comment:

  1. "& in truth the roses draw inward dulled by twilight
    a vague crimson ache clotted in a front yard"

    Beautiful. I like also how different parts of the poem echo in feeling and images: bicycle wheels outlined in fairy lights, the moon, the round vowels of 'you.'

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