tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post84627474291073317..comments2023-11-05T04:15:44.564-08:00Comments on Robert Frost's Banjo: Union Pacific #5Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15687192784861682991noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-49383943409566191152010-07-20T06:26:06.583-07:002010-07-20T06:26:06.583-07:00Hi HKatz & Alan
HKatz: Glad you liked it, &am...Hi HKatz & Alan<br /><br />HKatz: Glad you liked it, & glad you got the contrast--thanks!<br /><br />Alan: I should know you'd like the postcard part! Thanks a lot.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15687192784861682991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-70921474097689826502010-07-20T03:25:51.741-07:002010-07-20T03:25:51.741-07:00There are such wonderful images conjured up by the...There are such wonderful images conjured up by the juxtaposition of words such as chrome, cursive and, of course, the "sky blue postcard".Alan Burnetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01015127443616786425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-45005332323938455812010-07-19T19:53:26.096-07:002010-07-19T19:53:26.096-07:00blue sky a sky-blue postcard is a beautiful line. ...<i>blue sky a sky-blue postcard</i> is a beautiful line. I also liked the recurring 'chrome clouds' and 'thoughtballoons', and the contrast between a person who is a simulacrum, all smoke and thought clouds, and all the sharp physical details of the surrounding world, like the "flatbed truck hauling beeboxes".HKatzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17653570160517335758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-8491863817943387522010-07-18T09:55:03.538-07:002010-07-18T09:55:03.538-07:00Hi Willow: Thanks! All those wind turbines I saw ...Hi Willow: Thanks! All those wind turbines I saw on my road trip have really stuck in my mind. I'm also glad to be writing, even if by fits & starts.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15687192784861682991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-68139795130492960042010-07-18T09:41:04.429-07:002010-07-18T09:41:04.429-07:00WON-derful. I'm glad you're writing, John....WON-derful. I'm glad you're writing, John. For some reason "turbine’s jagged cursive" reached out and grabbed me. I like the way it feels on the tongue.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-23400745783683394862010-07-18T09:33:39.802-07:002010-07-18T09:33:39.802-07:00Hi LD & Tony
LD: Thanks--so glad you liked it...Hi LD & Tony<br /><br />LD: Thanks--so glad you liked it!<br /><br />Tony: Existential travelogue in postcard form? Thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15687192784861682991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-923346400747175722010-07-18T04:39:22.407-07:002010-07-18T04:39:22.407-07:00The Best Kind Of Postcard To Send.The Best Kind Of Postcard To Send.tonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03746435400444226665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821243838031243709.post-81453709912809367432010-07-17T19:39:13.967-07:002010-07-17T19:39:13.967-07:00I really like it. I like the style and random thou...I really like it. I like the style and random thoughts of the happenings as you travel and view the same things as the writer.L. D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/02270923121962761209noreply@blogger.com